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5 writing tips to keep your editor happy

1/18/2013

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1. Keep your tenses CONSISTENT!
     There’s almost nothing more painful for my eyes than when I read an article that flip flops back and forth between past and present tense. If you want your story to be told as if it’s happening “right now” and want to put your reader in the moment with you, tell it in the present tense. Otherwise, stick with past tense! Read through your story once you’ve finished and make sure that all of your tenses correlate.

2. USE the spellcheck button — it’s not there to just look pretty!
     I feel as though this is rather self-explanatory. But once you’re all done writing, click that cute little spellcheck button (if on Windows or type ⌘; on mac). Sure, my job is to edit submissions, and yes I can fix misspelled words, but misspelled words not only make you less credible as a writer to Brandon and I, but they stand out like eyesores to me. 

3. Reread your work, even AFTER you’ve used spellcheck...
     It may seem obvious, but after you’ve gone through spellcheck’s suggestions, reread your work a few times. Spellcheck will not catch all of your mistakes, especially the grammatical ones. “They’re” may show up as a correctly spelled word, but you also might have accidentally used it incorrectly, like when it should have been spelled “their or there”. These are called homophones and are very trying on an editor’s patience, so make sure you’re using the correct “you’re and your”, “to, two, and too” etc.
     Also, while reading through and examining your work, be sure to check your punctuation (or lack thereof, in some cases). If you have to use every breath of air in your lungs to read one single sentence of your writing, it might be smart to throw in a few commas or separate the large sentence into two or three separate ones. Contrarily, if you read a sentence and take a pause after every third word, maybe take a couple of commas out. Also keep in mind that repeatedly using the word “and” to link parts of your sentences together is okay to do, maybe twice, but if you find yourself using “and” three or more times in one sentence, it might be advisable to create multiple sentences.

4. Stay on subject — don’t let A.D.D. get the best of you
     A reoccurring issue that I’ve come across when editing our submissions is that a number of writers stray in the direction of their content. They jump back and forth, and all over the place, rather than remaining focused for their poor, innocent reader. Some of our writers have included random bits of information that didn’t pertain to the actual the story at all. The moral is... DON’T DO THIS!

5. Think of an attention grabbing, but somewhat descriptive title—AFTER you’ve finished writing
     Another mistake that a lot of writers make is in the creation of the title of their story - they develop the title well BEFORE they’ve even written the first sentence. It’s important to write freely, without the shackles of a subject. Don’t create your title until AFTER you’ve written the very last word. By doing so, you will be able to write freely and “matching” your title to the content won’t present itself as such a daunting task. For example: You can even just simply correlate your title with a certain word or phrase used in your story, which is memorable for your reader. NOTE: The title of your piece is the second most important part to grabbing a reader’s attention, second only to the photograph. Be sure to nail the title, so you are catching the attention of your prospective readers.
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Rebekkah Ferrebee attended Trine University for Communications and Marketing. Her life goal is to work in public relations and sales in a city somewhere, but until then she is an editor for Eye & Pen's Travel Origins magazine/blog.
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6 Comments
Wandering Justin link
1/21/2013 01:28:21 pm

Some good tips, and an important subject! I'll add that tenses can shift in a story IF it's a logical shift. For instance, you can tell a story in first person, but you flash back mentally to an early time. But you have to bring it back to the present.

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Lauren link
1/28/2013 11:52:47 am

Great article! I am an engineer by day so I don't use all of the writing skills that I learned in high school other than on my blog so I am quite rusty. It is unbelievable how many small errors I catch even after re-reading several times and spell-checking. Great tips on what specifics to look for!

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10/23/2013 04:13:02 pm

All the tips you shared here for writing are just amazing and very helpful for me. I just love writing and now i will follow you tips. Appreciate the efforts you put into finding us this informative tips.

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pure work writers assistant link
12/14/2017 11:12:04 am

Sure, my job is to edit submissions, and yes I can fix misspelled words, but misspelled words not only make you less credible as a writer to Brandon and I, but they stand out like eyesores to me.

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http://smartwriters.org/blog/english-homework-help-online-site link
12/19/2017 01:11:41 am

It may seem obvious, but after you’ve gone through spellcheck’s suggestions, reread your work a few times.

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12/25/2017 02:36:34 am

thanks for such detailed advice. I think that you have so much everything is interesting. with your advice, I'm getting better at writing an essay

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